Halo, apa kabar? (that means hello, how are you?)
So, in class we were reading a picture story book called “Woolves in the Sitee.” It was a good book to infer with. I found it very dark and mysterious. What I thought that would be a good idea was to use the same theme as the book, but turn it into something with horses. Sorry if you guys are getting tired of the horses, horses. horses, but I can’t help it!
So I’m going to write about a paragraph or two, then in a comment, you can finish it off if you want. Just to warn you, there might be a lot of inferencing in the text. Inferencing means know something when it doesn’t exactly say it. e.g Sarah put on her boots and coat. You can infer that it is wet or raining.
I had to get away. I was pushed too far in this lesson, and in my life, I wanted to keep Stormy, my beautiful black horse. I galloped towards the forest, tears streaming down my face; I had to get away from this terrible place. As I entered the forest, I waited to hear hoofbeats behind me, just in case my friends chased after me. Nothing. Whew! Slowly, I pulled Stormy up. I’m never going to leave you, and I hope you’re never going to leave me. I whispered to my dark gelding
Soundlessly, I walked through the dark forest. I hadn’t noticed before that there were shadows. Shadows covered the winding path, they creeped up the silent trees, and through the river. They won’t leave me alone, they’re everywhere. What have I done? Galloped through the deep dark forest, or ruined my life forever? Getting away was all I could think of right now, away from evil, closer to good. No way could I go back, Stormy would get sold in a flash, I couldn’t go back. Even if I wanted to, these shadows stopped me, they crowded me, and blocked my way, yet they were not solid, they would not move….

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Can you finish it off? If I get multiple people to finish it off, I will post my favourite, but I know whatever you write it will be good.
What Language is “Halo, apa kabar” in?
What can you infer from my text/story?
Can you Finish off my Story?
Was my story dark?









